This is so close. Catchy, shoe gaze, power pop. Problem is the drum machine. It is so obvious, so half assed it is distracting to the detriment of the song. Could also use some bass guitar.
Music
Pharmakon “Crawling On Bruised Knees”
Grim, caustic electronic drone that won’t bore you to death.
Testing with some Sabbath.
Supertzar into Symptom of the Universe.